中国雅思考生写作经典错误分析（一）---------吴建业
对于大多数国内雅思考生而言，5-6分是比较容易取得的分数。但是有部分同学连续考两次雅思，作文均得5分。他们百思不得其解：他们掌握了写作的技巧，也有充分的论点论据，为什么6分这么难？其实他们的症结在于语言基础太不扎实，出现大量语言错误，通篇充斥着句子结构和用词错误，甚至于第一段就出现“低级”语言错误十几处，让考官目不忍睹。在过去10年里，笔者批改了培训学员的十几万篇习作，对考生常见问题进行了归纳整理，及时指出他们的错误，并从中英语言差异的角度，详细分析问题出现的深层次成因，从而达到治标兼治本的效果。下面的改错练习，希望考生认真分析其错误之处并找出其成因，不要停留在改错的表层水平，应该挖掘其深层次的成因，以避免屡次犯同样的“低级”错误。

第一部分 经典错误
1. The invention of computers makes people live more comfortable and convenient.  
2. Don’t put hand in pocket.   
3. Many traffic accidents occurred is the result of careless.  
4. Last night was too cold.  
5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages, such as it is very clean and cheap.  
6. Some people claim that fast food will instead of traditional food.  
7. Despite he is very diligent at study, he stills cannot pass the IELTS test.  
8. I finished homework and went out of dormitory for a drink.  
9. Though the Internet has many benefits, but it also has some drawbacks.  
10. If you are convenient, please give me a hand.  
11. In the past, the price of milk was so expensive that few people could hardly afford it.  
12. I forgot my watch at home.  
13. Smoking is harmful to your body.  
14. Under his help, we past the IELTS test.  
15. The two types of designs exist difference.  
16. The true fact is he never offers help to others.  
17. There are many people plan to study abroad.  
18. Keep pets are very popular among people live in big city.  
19. If let alone at home, many old people are very dangerous.  
20. The society should pay more attention to the problems of education, poverty and disease, however, they seldom do so.  
21. Today is very hot, I stay home.  
22. When talking to the interviewer, my heart was beating very fast.  
23. He gave the rose to the lovely lady that he had bought for his wife.  
参考答案
1. The invention of computers enables people to live more comfortably and conveniently.
2. Don’t put your hand in your pocket.
3. Many traffic accidents occurred, which is the result of carelessness.
4. Last night it was too cold.
5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages; for example, it is very clean and cheap.
6. Some people claim that fast food will replace traditional food.
7. Although he is very diligent at study, he still cannot pass the IELTS test.
8. I finished my homework and went out of the dormitory for a drink.
9. Though the Internet has many benefits, it also has some drawbacks.
10. If it is convenient to you, please give me a hand.
11. In the past, the price of milk was so high few people could afford it.
12. I left my watch at home.
13. Smoking is harmful to your health.
14. With help, we passed the IELTS test.
15. The two types of design have difference.
16. The fact is that he never offers help to others.
17. There are many people planning to study abroad.
18. Keeping pets is very popular among people who live in the big city.
19. If let alone at home, many old people are very likely to get into danger.
20. The society should pay more attention to the problems of education, poverty and disease; however, it seldom does so.
21. Today it is very hot, so I stay home.
22. When talking to the interviewer, I feel that my heart was beating very fast.
23. He gave the lovely lady the rose that he had bought for his wife. 24. Compared with the performance of Linda, Kent’s is far from perfect.

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